Showing posts with label Week 12. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 12. Show all posts

November 9, 2016

STORY: THE WOODS


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The air was still. My body swayed back and forth rhythmically as I rode my horse to the edge of the clearing. I was with three others but the forest in front of us looked as though it was a depraved creature that was lurking in the mist. The sun had just fallen over the tree tops when we finished our supper not long before. There was no stopping though. We had to continue through the night.

We stopped at the edge of the forest, looking in at the ominous glow. When my companions looked at me for reassurance, I nodded looking forward, not wanting to see my face if my resolve cracked. I was scared, just as they were. There was a feeling that held strong on my heart not to go on now, to wait until first light. My heart was beating faster and faster as we entered the forest at a slow crawl. We were reluctant to be finally swallowed by its depth.

We rode slowly, dodging low branches and fallen trees. Suddenly there was noise right above us. Our heads all snapped up when a group of birds took off from a tree above. I let out a breath I didn’t realize I was holding. Luckily, our horses stayed calm through the small commotion. We continued through the forest, but this time we picked up some speed. Still, we moved slower than a trot, ears straining to hear something that isn’t there.

“Was that our hoofs or something else?” I thought to myself.

I halted the group, putting my hand up to signal them. They stopped and the sound of hooves continued. The horses, now hearing the sound, started to show their protest. I was about to heed the beast’s advice when a huge white creature jumped out on the path before us. It was gone the other way within an instant. I looked after the blur of white and saw that it was not a fowl beast. It was a white horse with a woman on it to match. She had silver hair that reflected light even in the gloom of the forest. It wasn’t her hair that made me look twice though. It was the look of absolute terror that distorted her face.

“What was she running from? Why was she so afraid?” I asked myself. Soon after the answer appeared before me. Another blur shot past us. If I were to have blinked, I wouldn’t have seen it. But I did not blink. This time there was a burly man on a great black stallion. The man held a rage that blurred us from his vision. It seemed that all he could see or think about was catching that woman.

Carried by instinct, I kicked my horse hard in its sides to chase the two fleeing riders. What was I going to do once I caught up to them? I had no idea. All I knew was that she needed help and that I needed to give it to her.

I took off into the forest followed by my two companions. They were likeminded and spurred to action when they realized what they had just seen. The three of us race through the forest, unscathed by the low branches and unfazed by the downed trees. I heeled my horse to encourage it to move faster.

“They were getting away!” I shouted. 
 

***

“Logan … Logan! Dude, wake up! Quit kicking me man.” an irritated voice said from behind me.

I opened my eyes wearily, confused as to where I was. My brain finally cleared and I realized I was at camp. We rode horses the day before. That must have been the reason for that strange dream. I rolled over to get more comfortable on the hard ground. I pulled my sleeping bag up over my head and fell back to sleep.





Author’s Note: 
This story was very interesting and had a lot of different elements and people woven into it. It was essentially about a woman, princess, knight, you name it. She reminded me very much of Breanne (spelling?) from Game of Thrones. She is told (by a magic mirror) what her future is/ who her husband is. She was told he was this grand warrior and knight who never stayed in one place for too long. There is a scene in the beginning of the story that is much like the one I wrote but the character in mine is a boy and the main character doesn’t go after the woman but the other two do. I hope you liked my little twist ending! Thanks for reading.



Bibliography: Stories from the Faerie Queene by Mary Macleod

November 6, 2016

READING NOTES: FAERIE QUEEN (PART B)

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Reading B:

The Enchanted Chamber
It seems like this guy is some sort of magician. I wonder what his purpose is. I could write about his magic tricks in the form of a poem. I could make this part a dream so that magic makes sense. I really like the idea of writing about reality and then having a dream put in there too. It reminds me of the Christmas movie where they all come out of her skirt.

 A Wicked Enchanter
This part is so dramatic. I think writing from the perspective of the woman who was his prisoner. I think I could make it very dramatic and have a lot of detail. It would interesting to tell the story of why the two left them behind. 

Strange Meetings
This also reminds me of Mulan a little bit because she pretends to be a man and ends up falling in love. I think it’s a weird thing that they fell in love but this story is different because she was in love and then sought him out by becoming a knight. Interesting that he would listen to what his enemies had to say and believe them so quickly. 

The Golden Girdle
I think it is interesting that women were allowed to fight and that they were not looked down upon for wanting to fight. I don’t think I like this part enough to write a story on it.

The False Florimell
I could write from the perspective of the girl who won the contest. I like how she didn’t know it was him and fought him. 

The House of Care
I like the descriptions that would go with the little cottage on the side of the hill with the blacksmith working hard by himself. 

Two Knights
I like this part. I could write from the perspective of Brit. It would be a very dramatic scene.

How Britomart Ended her Quest
I think this would be a cool part to write about. Seeing the person you love after trying to search for them for such a long time. Also realizing that you almost killed them would be intense.




Bibliography: Stories from the Faerie Queene by Mary Macleod

READING NOTES: FAERIE QUEEN (PART A)

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Reading A:

Sir Guyon
I could write about how she felt when she looked into the mirror and saw this knight. Then it could go into detail of her readying for her journey. Interesting that fighting was not in malice but to test each other’s skills in combat. Almost like practice. It would be weird going after every knight you saw because you hated them all. 

How Britomart Fought with Six Knights
I could focus on the moments leading up to the attack in the woods. It would be very detailed about the forest they were walking into and the moment that something rushed by them in front of them. She reminds me of the knight Brianna in the TV show Game of Thrones. I could write about the knight being attacked from her perspective. I could write from the perspective of the woman riding the horse away from the guy who is trying to kill her.

The Magic Mirror
I could write about their little fight. I could write like a diary of how she reacted to the mirror. It could be a flashback of when she saw him in the mirror.

The Cave of the Magician Merlin
I could write in the perspective of the girl when she is having these nightmares and not able to enjoy anything that she used to love to do. She could be talking to her nurse. I like when she said it was foolish to love a shadow. I could write in the perspective of the nurse.

Britomart’s Quest
I could write of how sad her dad was when she left.

The Castle of the Churl Malbecco
I could write about when she took her armor off and showed all of the other knights that she was a woman and not a man. It is interesting that she is so beautiful but still looks enough like a man to pass. Also I wonder if she has a low voice or something.

How Britomart Walked through Fire
I could write in the perspective of the sad knight.




Bibliography: Stories from the Faerie Queene by Mary Macleod